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Open Poetry #41

Believe

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2007-07-19 12:50 PM

Believe

When days became first months and then a year,
Did you believe our love would slowly wane,
That with the death of love we’d share a tear,
To bid adieu the joys we’d known in vane?
Were these just lies, these fading memories,
Of love professed, eternal,true and pure,
That disappear as wind through fallen leaves,
From barren trees whose beauty once was sure?
No my Sweet, let baseless fears be vanquished,
Remember times we’ve melded soul to soul.
When first your lustful lips were fully kissed,
My heart became a pawn in your control.

While in my arms or while you softly dream,
Believe our love is everything it seems.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-07-19 06:16 AM

Nice writing...Sadly sometimes love is just words, without the feelings, desires and the action...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-07-19 10:26 AM

"While in my arms or while you softly dream,
Believe our love is everything it seems."

~ I literally sighed when I read the closing lines to this very touching poem.

The apparent sincerity of your words would certainly make believing in your love, much easier!

Lovely penning.

EA
P.S. I like happy endings (to poems et al)! :angels:

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-07-19 10:34 AM

This is so lovely and delicate of a heart penning. Nicely done and much enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2007-07-19 01:09 PM

Thanks for writing this.

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