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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2007-07-18 08:58 AM



Woman Sounds

Lift of chin to lips
In exhale of lilac persuasion
Satin night she sips
Quivering in love’s vibration

Crimson begs to pool
Surging under light her breath
Sparkling unto eyes bejewel
Throb the trace of sighs are left

Waterfall of whisper dawn
Coursing moans let linger on

She draws inside his essence all
In silken sounds her nature call

Copyright Kkh 7/18/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2007-07-18 09:04 AM


Lovely! Lovely write!
So very sensuous.

MoonShadow
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2 posted 2007-07-18 10:25 AM


TD... marvelous music to the ears. None more delightful to a Romantic. (sigh)

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The Lady
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3 posted 2007-07-18 03:14 PM




"She draws inside his essence all
In silken sounds her nature call"

one word TD..

Oh!


Winter Butterfly
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4 posted 2007-07-18 07:05 PM


Intoxicating.
Magnus
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5 posted 2007-07-19 05:08 PM


Well done my friend....all things that make
a woman what she is....

Irresistable@@!!@@

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2007-07-19 06:03 PM


powerful and seductively romantic!

That ‘lilac persuasion’ sounds rather pleasant!!

LOVE the ‘waterfall of whisper’-dawn  imagery!!

[I’m wonderin’ ‘bout what ‘man sounds’ might be?!!]

applause!!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-07-19 06:34 PM


ooooooo

I knew I'd love it by the title and of course anything by you is always a treat!

Larry C
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8 posted 2007-07-19 06:36 PM


That's the way I like my woman! Can I say that?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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