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Sweet Words |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
From your mouth to mine resonating, whispering chocolate vowels |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so very romantic in so few words. simply beautiful |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Ooh very sensual, I liked this a lot and its very impressive the way you have summed up so much feeling in just a few words. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
"chocolate vowels" What a unique description  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like the taste of this one~~  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Paula, this is a very tasty senryu. Greatly enjoyed! Love, Margherita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling heart, you were always one of the best writers of Senryu. This is a perfect little gem, a sweet sensation of sumptuousness. Beautiful darling one just like you As always Mushy X x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, I found my lips puckering up for that kiss! ~ But I'm not into 'that' kind of chocolate! lol A sweetly sensuous senryu!  EA |
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