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More Than a Lover
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More Than a Lover |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"More Than a Lover" So many things I wish that I had said before I lay me down to sleep at night. While visions and emotions fill my head I toss and turn with plans to make it right. Yet still the mundane world holds tight the key and blocks the dreamworld beauty so sublime. Slow down I cry and let me just be me. Oh, let me find the words please, just in time. Please guide my thoughts and show my tongue the way. So I don’t hurt the soul that I adore. Do help me find the words I need to say. To keep her loving friendship ever more. She means more than a lover to me now. A friend much more than that she’ll always be. I wish that I could make her see some how, the friend I love and what she means to me. MoonShadow . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and beautiful again. enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle MoonShadow I am sure you could never hurt her soul she is very blessed if you are her friend |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so very good. beautiful |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Milady Drauntz, you do honor me, not once but twice. I am humbly grateful. James, Thank you for your kind attention. Kate, Tis I who am blessed beyond measure and ever mindful of her gentleness. Thank you for your kind words, Milady. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this 'write' is grand-fine and superbly meaningful, emotive Romanticism! [a wonderful 'read'...thank you!] sustained applause!! P.S.: Great choice of 'P.I.P. "UserName" (ID) too! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I come back to this because it really says a lot...sometimes when someone leaves us we have so much to say...but they don't really want to receive it...our heart has no one to share our emotions with...and that is the sadness of a missed love...James |
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k20z3 Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 10 |
NIce good work. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have always loved this rhyme scheme...hard to pull off sometimes beautiful poem here! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
James - Thank you for your kind words. The heart often whispers its song in poetry. K20Z3 - Thank you for the read and welcome to PiP. Dixie - I too like the rhyme scheme. Sometimes the music just rolls off the tongue if my muse is so inclined. Thank you for your kind words. |
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