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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-07-16 02:50 PM



      "Aroma de Amour"

a single candle to soften the darkness
lightly glow the flame that illuminates and warms
spread the essence outward
ever reaching with gentle fingers

fill the senses and stir the gentle wind
caress all that touches
aromatic fingers that entice
calm with a smile of understanding
and sigh with a breath of recognition

a desert breeze tosses her lilac against his jasmine
not so the combination overwhelms
yet entices the nostrils to flare and inhale
drink to intoxication
aromatic concoction that is the two of them
recognizably separate and scintillating together
entwined and full bodied as one


             MoonShadow
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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-07-16 04:01 PM


absolutely beautiful.

very romantic

a beauty to enjoy

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-07-16 04:43 PM


Wonderful...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-07-16 07:49 PM


Beautifully penned Ken~very nice indeed.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

MoonShadow
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4 posted 2007-07-17 06:51 AM


Thank you Drauntz, James and Nancy. Glad you stopped in to smell the roses. Thank you for your kind words.

           MoonShadow
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The Lady
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5 posted 2007-07-17 03:13 PM




enthralling gentle MoonShadow

"a desert breeze tosses her lilac against his jasmine"

speaks of a love so light yet deep

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
6 posted 2007-07-17 03:25 PM


   Kate... ever the perceptive one, Milady.
       I am humbled by words of truth and kindness.
                Thank you.

               MoonShadow
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BBGrrl
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7 posted 2007-07-17 03:46 PM


A delicious read.  Thank you.
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2007-07-17 03:54 PM


aromatic fingers that entice
calm with a smile of understanding
and sigh with a breath of recognition


enjoying the soft touch of words here~~

M

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
9 posted 2007-07-24 04:13 PM



  BBGrrl - Glad you enjoyed the taste. Thank you for the response

  Nakedthoughts - words softly placed have extreme power and gently touch as well. Thank you for your kind words.

          MoonShadow
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