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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2007-07-16 11:39 AM

There are never enough petals
I confess,
as a little girl I caused the death
of a thousand of flowers

Bees stung me red
around my head

A la folie

I quit picking
beaucoup fish
in a dirty sea

Give me a daisy
and I'll grow tired

testing dreamy wires

Il m'aime un peu

Oxeyes
make me bounce
as a marionette
passionnément

That's why I stick to tigers
They chase away pas du tout
from my imagination

I'm too reckless
with other's thoughts,
and considering the odds
rocks have a lot going for them

reference wiki

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-07-16 11:58 AM

I enjoyed the touch of class to this write.

Do I love this poem ~ or do I not! Oui ou non? Ma reponse est "Oui", bien sur! My answer is "Yes", of course!

Daisies never lie!

Love to you!

EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2007-07-16 12:01 PM

I love this! *S* The ending is perfect... especially since I've found myself envying rocks... as Simon & Garfunkel said "a rock feels no pain." *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-07-16 01:08 PM

I learn something new every day...
thank you, Dear!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-07-16 04:41 PM

Nice...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2007-07-16 05:27 PM

beautiful writing

and I'm with suthern (always loved that song)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-07-16 07:45 PM

Wonderful writing..I so my enjoy your style.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

7 posted 2007-07-16 10:19 PM

Vous avez une belle manière avec la poésie.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2007-07-17 06:31 AM

regalone, dang I like it when you speak spanglish....enjoyed it ms not forgotten

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

9 posted 2007-07-17 11:45 AM

Outstanding poem Reg! That has to be the best opening for a poem. I love it and I didn't even have to mangle a flower to figure it out. You're one in million.

Ed

“Well all the apostles, they’re sittin’ on the swings, sayin’ I’d sell off my savior for a set of new rings.”

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2007-07-17 12:22 PM

Really liked this in it's entirety, however this line I adored:

"I'm too reckless
with other's thoughts"

Love it when someone can put into words things that I know but haven't thought about in that way...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2007-08-03 04:36 PM

"and considering the odds
rocks have a lot going for them"

ah yes... yes they do...

well woven ma'am... indeed
the class and style..as I remember them..

o.le.crépuscule
Junior Member

since 2007-07-29

Posts 17
partout.

12 posted 2007-08-03 05:30 PM

t'es douée- et de plus, beaucoup de français. je pense que la langue française améliore beaucoup la poésie anglaise. bien fait.

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