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Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
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0 posted 2007-07-16 01:39 AM




Piercing her heart as she sings
Only one melodious cry
We also do the same thing
Yielding songs as we slowly die

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-07-16 01:56 AM


sad and sader when I read this tonight. I May feel different when I read it again tomorrow.

beautiful poem

enjoyed

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-07-17 06:53 PM


very fine!

serious applause!!

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-07-17 07:32 PM


yes, we do

indeed

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-07-18 02:14 PM



sad and powerful work

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