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Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2007-07-15 06:51 PM

once again
i walk these halls
that caught my tears
and my footfalls
where spirits, kindred
and souls, divined
embraced each other
through quagmires, refined
and through the looking glass beheld
our yesteryears
and songs sung well
what stands now in our future days
when what was lost in winsome ways
naught else but hope shall now prevail
and, thus, reveal more tales to tell

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

1 posted 2007-07-15 07:06 PM

And what is learned
when all is done
although the spirit carries on
it seems that hope is floating free
and only caught by folk like thee

If only we could lift the veil
and see the things that still prevail
I'm sure that then, that songs sung well
would give us far more tales to tell.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-07-15 08:08 PM

Beautiful

enjoyed

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2007-07-16 01:28 AM

Beautifuly expressed , they do say hope springs eternally

Hope

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2007-07-16 01:31 AM

Thank you, Ivor, for such a beautiful reply! I love when poetry begets poetry... I am honored and touched

And thank you, Drauntz, for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed it!

"Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears
To-day of past Regrets and future Fears..."
-Omar Khayyam

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2007-07-16 01:33 AM

Thank you, Hope, for your sweet reply

"Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears
To-day of past Regrets and future Fears..."
-Omar Khayyam

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-07-16 01:59 AM

Nice...James

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

7 posted 2007-07-20 03:51 AM

i remember those good days of summer
you took me back, thanks

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-07-20 12:23 PM

good read

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