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ladyofthevalley
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since 2007-07-14
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0 posted 2007-07-14 11:29 PM



Slowly you go from me
to that place
that place that is special
because you have arrived

I will miss you and look
up at the same stars that
shine on you

I will slowly fade away
as I am lost without your
light

Then I will slowly return
again as you come back
closer

Arriving just in time to
save me from myself

Taking me high above the stars
with your sweet escape

We will surrender together


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I Love Jesus
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ar.
1 posted 2007-07-14 11:38 PM


I liked this! It was beautiful!
God bless you always,
Stacey

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-07-14 11:45 PM


truly very beautiful!!!
and a warm welcome to the wonderful place.



dgvarner
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3 posted 2007-07-15 12:31 PM


very nice...

welcome to the blue pages

g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-07-15 12:33 PM


Oh!  This is lovely.
Welcome and I am so looking forward
to reading more of your poetry.

Alison

ladyofthevalley
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since 2007-07-14
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5 posted 2007-07-15 12:56 PM


Thank you all for such kind replies! I am smiling!!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2007-07-15 07:59 AM


"We will surrender together"


nice~~
WELCOME
m

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2007-07-15 08:42 PM


Welcome to Passions, Lady.  Please,
check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Jenna
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8 posted 2007-07-17 04:34 AM


This bought tears to my eyes. It is something that I can relate to very much so at the moment.

Excellent

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2007-07-19 04:32 PM


Nice...James
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2007-07-19 06:42 PM


a new face!

welcome to Passions! I will enjoy reading your work

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