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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

0 posted 2007-07-14 04:38 PM

The Love Composition

Invigorating.
Pretty, breathtaking Goddess.
My every heartbeat.
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Inspirational.
Your ostensible beauty.
You keep me writing.
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Predomination.
You have captured all my love.
And enslaved my mind.
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Multimillionaire.
You bought my heart and my soul.
You just took over.
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Compositional.
These haiku's have one message.
Tell you I love you.

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (07-14-2007 05:22 PM).]

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

1 posted 2007-07-14 06:34 PM

This is very touching. As if you are writing to your muse.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-07-14 08:03 PM

beautiful.

enjoyed

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2007-07-14 10:55 PM

a beautiful expression....and I loved the ending, how each lead to those three words...

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Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-07-15 12:50 PM

I like this

THe poem flowed so well
that I didn't realize they were haiku

Very nice.

A

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2007-07-15 03:20 AM

Letters in red are always passionate,
even more powerful when expressed to the one you love.

By the way, I like your PIP name!

Loved your poem, or your composition of many "little" poems

each a piece of your heart, connected together in the end, with the last piece, "I Love You"

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania