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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2007-07-14 09:50 AM



Robin's Wings
You're my song today
and spur me on to dance.
In sparkling words you know the way
of wings beyond romance.

Your vision waits not on a dream,
but courage in the climb,
Armed with heart, aloft, you glean
a waltz in measured time.

3/16/07 ~ Klassy Lassy

© Copyright 2007 Klassy Lassy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-07-14 09:54 AM


Well written,  good rhythm.  It may be short
but it does not miss it's point.  Thanx!


Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2007-07-14 10:16 AM


Sometimes, Barry, one thought is all I can hold in the melee. It's good see you and to be reading your poems again.  ~ Karen


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3 posted 2007-07-14 10:44 AM


what a sweet and uplifting poem! a great way to start my saturday!

Freedom Now

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2007-07-14 01:51 PM


Big here.   Be blessed!  ~ K
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5 posted 2007-07-15 07:46 AM


a tasty treat
hello Karen!

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-07-15 10:23 AM


Wow, this is beautiful indeed.
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7 posted 2007-07-15 02:42 PM


Hello, Klassy Karen! Like the robin's, may your own wings keep your heart afloat! ~ and may you dance your way to the top of any mountain that may come between you and your dreams.

Thank you for sharing your poetic spirit with us. ~ It's been awhile, darlin'.

Hug with love,

Linda

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8 posted 2007-07-15 08:55 PM


This is so sweet in it's simplicity. Loved it, latearrival
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