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Open Poetry #40
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icebox
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in the shadows
0 posted 2007-07-14 06:48 AM

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searing illusions

years of dawns' false hopes rising

shedding endless dreams

©2007 by icebox

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2007-07-14 07:47 AM

sounds like a taco to me...

sheesh, I'm bad.

Somebody oughtta spank me!

*ahem* I shall be serious.

This changes meaning read aloud...and I love that I can't tell if it's "seering allusions" or your "searing illusions"...

It intrigues me, as always, lovie.
Robert Jordan
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2 posted 2007-07-14 08:42 AM

Icebox,

His is a neat little “Taco”.

Don’t spank nobody—sorry, couldn’t help it.

Bobby—Too old to spank anyway
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-07-16 12:05 PM

just hand me a tequila sunrise
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-07-16 05:17 PM

I'm with Kacy
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