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divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
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dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2007-07-13 11:55 PM



I have known a love
so consuming it surrounds me
seeps into my pores, burns
hotly in the blood that flows in my veins,
and trickles into the very soul of me.
a white hot passion that blazes
across the pages of my memory,
twisting itself into every waking thought,
weaving tightly into the very fibers of my being

I have known a love -
soothing, like a warm blanket
on a chilly winter's night,
folding me safely within its depths,
a contented sigh in midnight silence
that whispers through my dreams
'you are here, you are safe, you are mine.'

I have known the sorrow of loss
that lives darkly in the heart,
the rain of scorching tears
that tattoo flesh and steal breath
with choking sobs of hopelessness,
that strip the eyes' light and shade
the windows to the soul.

I have known sorrow intimately,
succumbed to its caress.
Enticed by its siren song,
I've walked willingly into its ocean,
slid silently into its murky depths,
been drug into its undercurrent
and engulfed by its waves,
yet, it cannot claim me

for I have known a love
so consuming it surrounds me,
seeps into my pores, burns in my blood,
filling my soul with the hope of
infinite tomorrows, and here,
in this vast sea of sorrow,
hope floats

[This message has been edited by divine chaos (07-14-2007 07:11 AM).]

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-07-14 12:52 PM


Ummm, it's just your groupie checking in ...

I love this.  Lots.

Alison, the gropie (I mean GROUPIE one)

Yep, I do.

divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
2 posted 2007-07-14 06:53 AM


thanks much, my gropie groupie!

~Sheli

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-07-14 07:20 PM


... and I love it all over again ...

xoxoxo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-07-14 07:29 PM


Thanks for this...wonderful...I wrote one concerning hope and love that I will post in the near future...James
scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
Posts 59

5 posted 2007-07-15 11:16 PM


you inspire me, Beautiful One...
thank you.. from the bottom of my heart for your splendid poem xoxoxoxo

~if i knew the way, i would take you home~

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