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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-07-13 07:24 PM



Another one written a few years ago when things were not looking good.  I still believe that you make your own 'luck' as long as you stay positive and accept help from others...

Redundancy

I had a little job once,
it kept us all alive.
Although we had some awful bills,
just trying to survive.

T’was not a life of luxury,
I didn't earn a lot.
But we survived quite happily
and knew that some could not.

Then one day came the dreaded news,
your job's no longer there.
I'm sure you know its for the best,
you see, "we really care!".

If we don't sack, just half of you,
there'll be no jobs for us.
So take this money, go away,
try not to make a fuss.

The package paid off all our bills,
and now we're left with nought,
except a mortgage and two kids
plus several things we bought.

I'll get another job I said,
and try both night and day.
But until then we must survive,
on my wife's part-time pay.

And so we battle onwards,
now accustomed to our plight.
I'm sure this winter of despair,
must turn to summers light.

If you're contented in your work
and coping now quite fine,
be ready if some future day
your job expires; .....like mine.

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

[This message has been edited by ivordavies (07-14-2007 01:40 AM).]

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-13 08:30 PM


How true a life! sir.

enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-07-13 09:30 PM


yeah, I found this out personally and am still struggling with a new car payment for a car I bought when I thought I had a good-paying job for keeps

Thanks for sharing

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2007-07-13 09:56 PM


Ivor my friend, this is amazing that you write this today, this happened to me this week and my job ends on Monday coming, fate turns the tables and more and more we have to live on hope and look toward different avenues of work. It is a shame when you enjoy the work and company, but these things happen and we tend to cope somehow. You have written a great poem here Ivor and one I can so relate to this week. Thank you. Wish me luck and have a great day.

Rick

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
4 posted 2007-07-14 01:57 AM


Hard to face reality when the axe falls! In my case i had been with the same Company 25 years.  Due to my age and the seniority of the job role I spent 12 months trying to get a 'similiar' job.  After this 'reality check' I went back self employed selling for them, then as a vehicle inspector! Some 30 years with the same Company and was then made redundant again!

Would you believe I am now in a more senior position than my first one, in a different Company and loving the job.

I think this has had an effect, on not only my poetry, but my outlook on life.  It does go to show though that there is life after redundancy!

Rick I know only too well the problems you face and wish you the best of luck, only suggestion I can make is grab what you can and then look for what you want.  The year out of work finanacially crippled me with two teenagers in tow!

Funny how life turns around though, my eldist son is now a part owner and the Operations Director of the Company I work for!

Again my heartfelt wishes to everyone who has to face this....

Ivor

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
5 posted 2007-07-14 09:09 AM


Ivor,

I answered this yesterday, but I didn't get it posted.  I wonder about doing things over, the principles behind the concept.

My husband was laid off after 22 years from a lumber mill.  It took five years for him to secure another position.  Now we are at a transitional point again due to injury.  

A friend used to tell me, "Do one thing and do it well."  However, I think it is more that whatever one does should be done well, in order to move forward.

Your experience left me with a heartwarmed smile...so pleased at the outcome.  I wish the same for Rick. ~ Karen

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2007-07-14 09:33 AM


A very sad truth
No one is secure even those who think they are
We can only survive on 2 salaries, It's so different a lifestyle than when i was young,
Those days are gone
You expressed your feeliings well in this piece
Liz

Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
7 posted 2007-07-15 05:49 PM


I’ve never been redundant
It seems I missed a lot ?
Always been quite happy
With anything I got

I never craved for stardom
A job like Tony Blair
I must be missing something
Or maybe just don’t care

Some even think I’m crazy
The village idiots smile
My life it aint been easy
Although it’s been worthwhile

I never shirked from duty
The Queen has been my boss
Always tried to give back more
Then never count the cost

I’m not a good companion
For those folk seeking fame
In fact I often wonder
Do they see it as a game?

I’ve money in my wallet
A bed to rest my head
A lovely girl beside me
I think enough’s been said

I’m not an easy target though
I laugh at fools.. out loud
I can spot the tosser
Hiding in the crowd

I don’t like being beaten
My memory serves me well
If anyone would cross me
I may change?.. who can tell?

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