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Winter Hiatus

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Tomer
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0 posted 07-13-2007 06:54 PM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tomer

Sad like
A drip of wine,
Bending with its bloody drop,
Pirouetting with
His loosely fit tie.

A winter stage,
Curled above
His brown, laced boots,
Sat his black, cashmere scarf.

The signs of green
That watched each corner,
Lay itís white eyes upon
His thick, raspy, skin.

His knuckles seamed together,
With freckles of hair
That spun its roots
Into the frosty air
That pasted the window stores.

Dicing his way
Through each corner,
He spotted the wooden bench
He grew ever so fond of.

Like a woven quilt,
Stitched with hands of silk,
He sat with his back
To the peoples stares,

As he stray
The air with blue hues,
His vision caught fire
Among the icy loom.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (07-13-2007 07:27 PM).]

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Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
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1 posted 07-14-2007 01:34 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

oh, you wrote fine poem. beautiful.

enjoyed
Artic Wind
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2 posted 11-05-2007 03:59 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Fine poem indeed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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