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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2007-07-13 04:53 PM




Tonight I am watching the sky
regretting
all the shooting stars
I’ve missed

remembering
a young me
laughing away
secret wishes
in false bravery

to find myself here
years and years later

realizing
those wishes…

are lost
in space

forever…


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-13 05:00 PM


absolutely beautiful.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-13 05:23 PM


Yes, some of my wishes and hopes and desires seem to be lost in space...but I have new ones...sometimes I realize that my old wishes were not so wise...but they were my wishes...some I am happy that they didn't come true...some I regret and wish they had come true...James
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
3 posted 2007-07-13 06:48 PM


.

If wishes were horses
beggars would ride . . .

But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.


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