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LeeJ
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0 posted 07-13-2007 08:24 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LeeJ

light dares us to come in
like an enormous hand
in faithful evolution
fair and loving
leaping flames
like a rich
cloak of scattered droplets

entralling rendezvous
passionately untamed
powerfully connected
internally married
to an intimate
side of life reclaimed

urging incantations
of damp spring air
hoping to catch
the lofty title of
human reasoning
within an
unspoken truce
beyond compare

flushed with color
unable to deny
imagination
entirely coincidental
a benevolent embrace
teaching an artist's vision
steeped in a summer's
amber gaze

like a breeze ripples corn
whispering soft
a threshold of voice
intensified  hawthorn
lined white face
of the full curve
of destiny's breast
sworn to

wisdom of shepards
dancing grass pulses
through
like a healing balm of love
on a thread of mystery
belonging to virtue
and to you

© Copyright 2007 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Robert Jordan
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1 posted 07-13-2007 09:24 AM       View Profile for Robert Jordan   Email Robert Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Robert Jordan's Home Page   View IP for Robert Jordan

LeeJ,

This stream of counciousness poem leans more towards Joyce's "Finnegans Wake" than his "Ulysses".

I never could get into "Finnegans Wake".

Bobby
JL
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2 posted 07-13-2007 09:50 AM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"entralling rendezvous
passionately untamed
powerfully connected
internally married
to an intimate
side of life reclaimed"

Great write LeeJ.
Love this verse.

Libertine:
"He didn't resist temptation. He pursued it."

JL

What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

passing shadows
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3 posted 07-13-2007 10:27 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow Lee

this is not something one should read while being buzzed on Miller Chill

I might just have gotten some inspiration! But sleep might get me first. *sigh*

I'll have to come back to this

HopeS
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4 posted 07-13-2007 12:09 PM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Wow , Lee this had a wonderful feeling flowing through this

Hope
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5 posted 07-14-2007 09:28 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine 'write'!

I particularly LOVE this imagery:

“a benevolent embrace
teaching an artist's vision
steeped in a summer's
amber gaze”

“like a breeze ripples corn
whispering soft
a threshold of voice”

“dancing grass pulses…

like a healing balm of love
on a thread of mystery
belonging to virtue
and to you”

Applause!!
Artic Wind
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6 posted 11-05-2007 03:56 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

very much enjoyed write!

ARCTIC WIND
 
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