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Lily and the Jack of Hearts #2

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The Lady
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Lily was a princess, she was fair-skinned and as precious as a child,
She did whatever she had to do, she had that certain flash every time she smiled.
       ~ Bob Dylan


her hands itched  
for the feel of his arrogance  
surely it bore out    
the promise of his stance  
he saw her    
turned away  

the princess knew her way around
yet she could not smile this time
  
he was forever tall
with expensive brown eyes  
she knew she would pay the price

she folded her wings  
pitched her voice in the key of desire
laid her whole hand on the table

the Jack heard her
knew she was already his

he had only to stir the air

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-13-2007 12:03 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful. again. so fine a imagination.

enjoyed.
The Lady
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thank you Drauntz
for your kind reply
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Ah, Kate, this is so good.

he was forever tall
with expensive brown eyes  
she knew she would pay the price


How did she get those eyes?  I was sure that I had bought them a long time ago.  And he said that they were one of a kind!

Hugs,
A
The Lady
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ahhh Alison my friend
they all have expensive eyes
or say they do

you made me smile BIG
thank you...

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"she folded her wings  
pitched her voice in the key of desire"

~ Oh! Lady Kate! You've found me out! lol

"he was forever tall
with expensive brown eyes  
she knew she would pay the price"

~ Some men are worth any price!

Love your poetry, Lady!

LA
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her hands itched  
for the feel of his arrogance  
surely it bore out    
the promise of his stance  
he saw her    
turned away

Brilliant...
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Linda Angel  
I see even angels are willing to give all for love
thank you


thank you Page!
you know how I appreciate you


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 07-14-2007 05:12 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Lady Kate!!  this is awesome! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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her hands itched  
for the feel of his arrogance  

Lady Kate, my oh my do I know that 'itch'
~sigh~

I love this, and I've missed reading you
while I've been away from the blue

~Sheli
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thank you Roniece  
my friend for your kind reply

ah Sheli  
that itch always demands scratching, yes?  
thank you
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"he was forever tall
with expensive brown eyes  
she knew she would pay the price"

i know him
yes i do believe i dated him....
The Lady
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thank you Helen

I am positive you dated him
and lived to tell the story
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   An instalment that titilates the appetite with imagery that makes one yearn for more... Your mastery is exemplified. Perhaps, at least, a Novella... Yes?

           MoonShadow
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thank you gentle MoonShadow

this is a love story beyond compare
it would take eternity to write it

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LadyKate~

Ahhhhhhh, ...

'he was forever tall'

... and, "a love story beyond compare" ?

Yes ... I can see that~
Share the "eternity" ?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

The Lady
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thank you so much Marge
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