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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 07-12-2007 06:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


it wasn't easy unwinding my mind
but your bare shoulders had handles
that knew where my hands needed to be

to spin my stones like a tipsy turve
and you said it was in the water
and the warm of other's eyes

knowing you were being watched
that made you afraid enough
to burrow into old bone leather

looking for armor without amour
just for the moments of exploration
until you got your boots back on

and swayed back into the saddle of my hands


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daark



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 07-12-2007 07:44 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

soft smile sighs here D.


yep,

that word.

aziza
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2 posted 07-12-2007 10:29 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

You know, I like this.  It brings a smile and a wonderful picture in my mind.

A
The Lady
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3 posted 07-12-2007 08:22 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



ahhh being watched
in the saddle of your hands
stranger darlin'

might I say you titilate?
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 07-13-2007 06:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms gs, thanks lady friend

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ms az, it is a lovely picture I presume, thanks babe

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ladyone, thanks for watching ms, you are a blessing
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 07-14-2007 02:17 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

and the warm of other's eyes...

mmm yes, I like this!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 07-14-2007 07:12 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms R & B thanks for the read
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon


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i'm always glad to find you here
when I come tiptoeing through the blue
you always leave me with a smile .. and a sigh

~sheli
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it is always a pleasure to see your eyes on my words, thank you
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9 posted 09-05-2007 03:57 PM       View Profile for BBGrrl   Email BBGrrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BBGrrl

Are you telling my story?  I felt this daark.
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 09-06-2007 06:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

only if you have the time to listen?

thanks ms
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