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Quiet Time

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aziza
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0 posted 07-11-2007 08:08 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for aziza

Quiet Time


Quiet time with you is
Reading as light filters
Through the window in
Pastels of dusk
Listening to the swell of
Music lift around us
Knowing that we are twins
Of the soul
Linked by history that
Precedes us
Forged by futures together

Quiet time with you
Flirts with passions untouched
Memories of lessons learned
Who we are together
And what we are not afraid
To share

Quiet time with you
Erupts in an explosion of need
Physical touching
Minds merging erotic
Dreams once held close
Now shared

In the quiet time with you

---

Alison

[This message has been edited by aziza (07-12-2007 11:04 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 07-11-2007 10:43 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Quiet time can be

explosive...

in art, music, thought, word,

deed...indeed!

check your email!

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 07-11-2007 10:57 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

A grand-lovely and effectively emotive 'write'
[although, one tiny point...I would love to see you
lose the word 'reeks' from an otherwise rather
sterling piece]

I particularly admire:

"Quiet time with you is
Reading as light filters
Through the window in
Pastels of dusk
Listening to the swell of
Music lift around us
Knowing that we are twins
Of the soul
Linked by history that
Precedes us
Forged by futures together (!)"

serious sustained applause!!

aziza
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3 posted 07-11-2007 11:42 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

I totally agree with the word "reeks" -- thanks for bringing it to my attention .. and thank you for supporting me as you do.

Alison
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4 posted 07-12-2007 06:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms az, some of my favorite time this, enjoyed it ms
SPIRIT
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5 posted 07-12-2007 10:06 AM       View Profile for SPIRIT   Email SPIRIT   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SPIRIT

Quiet times...I remember those. Lovely and very softly ~ sensual.

Reek though is quite an odorous word and appears to take away from the actual meaning of this great read.
aziza
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6 posted 07-12-2007 11:07 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Sunshine -

Thank you for the suggestions and help that you so kindly offered.  I appreciate you so much.

You are a beautiful woman.

Alison
aziza
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7 posted 07-12-2007 11:12 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Daark

Quiet time is what feeds me.
Know what I mean?

A
----------------------

SPIRIT

Thank you for reading and understanding.

A

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And ya'll, I kicked 'reek' to the curb.  What was I thinking anyway?  Beats me.

Thanks and hugs
Alison
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8 posted 07-12-2007 01:40 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

Absolutely beautiful.

and as always.

enjoyed the quietness and the softness
Rick
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Dear Alison, just wonderful, I hope each word is so true for you, if so you are one lucky woman. Loved the read and your passion. Have a wonderful day.

Rick
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10 posted 07-12-2007 04:51 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...James
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11 posted 07-12-2007 05:27 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

"as light filters
Through the window in
Pastels of dusk"
Bravo!a fine write, lady Alison
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I could use a little quiet time myself

good write, made me smile
The Lady
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a magnificent expolosion
in quiet time Alison

Drauntz
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read again. long for a quiet time for myself.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 07-15-2007 03:04 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Alison... this is beautiful! I love my quiet time too! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Beatiful

ARCTIC WIND
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What could be more real than fantasies and dreams?

Hey, nobody's human!

Dadygoose
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This makes me smile when I reread this and takes my imagination away as though reading it for the first time, dreams I can barely write or talk about.
There is no substitute for absolute honesty and this write just crackles with it.
So many greatful embraces, ali friendly
J  

Hey, nobody's human!

Alison
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Jaime,

Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Alison
 
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