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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-07-11 04:15 AM


Baby, baby, you’ll be fine
and I’ll be fine and they’ll be fine
when a bubble of belief pop-pops
and lies like a fallen leaf
on the ground of an illusion.

It takes a time before the stretch
and blow-up of the truth
rebels and fights against
normal ignorance
but, picky-picky, no big bang
just planned obsolescence
of what the bubble holds.  

Knives and swords and weapon things,
dress-up tools for life’s decrees,
an ineffective means of bursting a belief
and the mind, my powerhouse,
scuttles forward then retreats
because too slow I miss the twist
and lose its show of force.

And that leaves me, the ignorant,
to bend, retrieve, assimilate,
bit by bit each drop of truth
but I lose the rhythm, see
bend when I should stretch
and vice versa till I sit
immovable and comfortable
with a bubble overhead!

Helen / 11 July 2007


© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-07-11 09:53 AM


Hah, you've done it again...loved the descriptions...how life plays tug of war with us...we are most certainly the children...

Helen, this was word candy...thank you

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-07-11 12:48 PM


I have many of my own bubbles and balloons burst. And those doses of reality can be very grounding! ~ Often too grounding for my liking!

Loving hug,

Linda


dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2007-07-11 03:09 PM


I like this one...

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2007-07-11 04:13 PM


Thanks all for your comments.  Very much appreciated and, LeeJ, glad I gave you something to chew on.  
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