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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
the sun was shining blue skies tasted sweet and I could look into Heaven so I waved magic clouds opened and became a whisper or a kiss they wrapped me in comfort until we descended below their milky contours and flew like a giant awkward bird over lush greenery and ribbons of rivers, sloughs, creeks weaving and lacing into knots and lost paths a maze of water that moved, with intent, from glaciers and mountain peaks to the waters of the Sound as if they were running from the home that I was excited to see again --- Alison |
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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
Awesome! i loved this poem. Felt like i just got off the plane with you. Taks me back to when i came back from Holland. Good Write!! -Jamison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl stuff ms az...I do know the feeling so well, each day as I leap from my barney sheets onto the cowboy bob carpet and hurry to my disney decor closet to put on my space suit..I am so blessed being a psychiatrist. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, this carried me and placed me in a vision of greatness....truly a lovely read... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine ‘write’! I especially LOVE : the ‘sweet’ blue skies… and the line: “…I could look into Heaven so I waved (!)” as well as the image of those: magic clouds wrapping (one) in comfort Applause!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow--felt like i was flying with you! great imagery! reads like a smooth flowing dream... enjoyed! hugs, g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This flowed nicely... enjoyed M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Jamison I am so glad that you flew with me. And, I am more happy that you saw through my eyes. Thank you for commenting. Alison ___________ You know, D, you made me laugh out loud. I love your comment - and I am glad you are too. Just don't analyze me (grins big). Alison __________ Thank you for dropping by, James. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know that you read and enjoyed. Alison __________ LeeJ Thank you. I enjoy your writing so much and am thrilled when you read mine. A __________ secondhanddreampoet Thank you for sharing what you like in this poem. You are a wonderful part of my life in PiP. A __________ g Thank you for making this word journey with me. I am glad that you enjoyed and thank you for taking the time to write a comment. A __________ M Thank you for reading and writing a response. It means a lot to me. A |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is breathtaking... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the beauty of this turns me around and around Alison anxious to see what lies in each corner |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"and I could look into Heaven so I waved" very cool  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful as always, dear lady. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and I could look into Heaven so I waved Alison... I love these lines... RDB |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"and I could look into Heaven so I waved" How lovely. I just flew home from Seattle. I saw the clouds covering clouds,the winding streams and rivers. I saw the snow capped mountains rising high above the clouds, but my simple mind did not even think to make of it a poem. You did that for me. thank you, latearrival. |
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