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matthew hallman
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since 2007-07-04
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0 posted 2007-07-11 02:56 AM




Perfection


This is to the one person that can make u feel like your on top of the world.
There is one thing in this world
that can make u feel perfect and warm.
That there’s nothen that can make u fell like the world isn’t scary.
This thing can make u cry and sad but u always feel happy in your heart.
This beautiful thing is LOVE
the love u feel in her touch, the compassion u feel in her kiss,
you feel like you can fly when u hold her.
Ever time u look in her eyes you feel
what its like to be happier then anyone in the world.
Those eyes big and brown can see into your soul
they make u want to be a better man.
They make u want to change all the bad things u do in your life.
You would do anything to feel just like that for the rest of your life.
She is your only hope for true happiness.

© Copyright 2007 Matthew R. Hallman - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2007-07-11 07:35 AM


Perfection describes your poetry!

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

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