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As It Seams
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As It Seams |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As It Seams My mind has softened to face each day with wishful thinking of promised say. The highs and lows of words in thought etching the memories words have brought. A tapestry of ifs that once had laid the very foundation of to be or not to be it seamed to live within a song of love. My mind has softened to ease each day to take with it the bridge's sway. To and fro, left and right releasing today into tomorrow's flight. A time for then and a time for now that join together in silent hold. What was is still, though the other side wrapped and treasured to later unfold... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this seems peaceful and calming to me nice work  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzBliss~ 'To and fro, left and right releasing today into tomorrow's flight.' How lovely this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
pleasant, interesting ‘write’! I am especially fond of: “to live within a song of love” and, more true than most folks might realize (based on the actual nature of ‘time’) is: “A time for then and a time for now that join together in silent hold. What was...is still (!)” [what we call the ‘past’, ‘present’, and ‘future’ actually exist in simultaneity on an unmoving ‘timescape’ (dimension) like towns on a 'landscape'... It is we (all matter) that are undergoing continuous change and motion relative to the fixed ‘timescape’...like an airplane flying over the landscape (which is fixed in place relative to the plane's motion)] Applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dixie..just in a thoughtful mood today thinking about words and how they can have meaning or not~~~  Thank you, Marge. I have missed reading and being on here but sometimes my mind needs to be elsewhere to survive. M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe I should have called this "Timescape"...maybe I will write another with that title~~ Thanks, Bruce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... especially the first verse! *S* And PS is right... it IS calming. *S* Great write! *S* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Maureen! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Definitely a touch of grace here, M-Lady. *hugs*....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Suthern, Sue and Jo...thank you for your kind responses M |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
it is a very calming piece...resolute |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
it is quite calming I am the little cracked mirror |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's funny, but I didn't write this when feeling calm, actually I was upset but maybe it was what was needed to calm the thoughts. Thank you, again for sharing your thoughts. M |
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