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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 07-10-2007 06:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


fridays are crinkle creeks with walls sometimes
when alleys do chance meetings
of highways and side street beauties

you were leaving behind birds and bees
and a parking lot with puppy chews
that you threw your free time too

your love box was in back up then
for an stranger on wrong way blue
taking stogies to the grave stone man

you threw him a smile with no price tag
lady chrome over candy and tan
one of those daydreams stopped in time

that would make old hounds chase their tails

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logography by daark

scribblenote: birds and b's is an exotic bird place next to a cigar store owned by a local mortician.  the rest is just positions of queens and rooks on the asphalt board

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 07-10-2007 06:56 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"for an stranger on wrong way blue
taking stogies to the grave stone man"

and I am chasing my waggle tail too...

(this would be "that way" that I spoke about...)

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Dark Stranger
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2 posted 07-10-2007 06:12 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

serene one, thanks lady...yep I get it, seems you have been so many places I have.
Dominique-Simone
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3 posted 07-11-2007 10:46 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

What an excellent line...

"you threw him a smile with no price tag"
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 07-12-2007 06:36 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you lady page, thank you for the read
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5 posted 07-12-2007 10:15 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

I like this too.  I can't pin point one line because they all capture me.  It's like reading a beautiful puzzle today - and, again, you leave me with a smile.

A
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6 posted 07-12-2007 12:15 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"you threw him a smile with no price tag"

love that line, too

reading you is always fun

M
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and I love...

"one of those daydreams stopped in time

that would make old hounds chase their tails"

I find special meaning there

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 07-13-2007 06:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms az, thank you for searching through the limbs.

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MMs thank you for touching ms


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ladyone, always a dog at heart I guess?  thanks lady
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9 posted 07-13-2007 07:27 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You do bring on Fridays
with a smiling down...

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10 posted 07-13-2007 09:18 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Any time there is a Friday with your poetry here, there is certain to be a smilin good time right around the corner.  
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 07-13-2007 05:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun, thanks lady friend

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ms gs, thank you for your eye words
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 07-14-2007 02:15 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

you threw him a smile with no price tag..

love to throw you a smile any day Mr Daark..    RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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ms R&B, would be a pleasure to reap one of your smiles ms, thanks
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14 posted 10-21-2007 11:10 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

smiles all around

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