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New Beginnings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The sound of death a distant hum With shadows breath a constant drum Where dewdrops lose their glorious bright And colors slip back into white And chaos runs the rivers grime O'er a slooth box made of time Filtering a gold of goal To build the essence of a soul I can not pierce the chaos gray Nor can I say this is the way But somewhere in each waterfall I feel there is a distant call The path of life to me is clear With all its pain and all its fear It is the essence of a power As beautiful as a flower So view the Nova of your death A new beginning and new breath |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You breathe poetry ... and I'm so very glad that you do~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your verses flow like crystal brooks A wisdom never found in books And you, my friend provide the stream that I will travel in my dream Love Liz |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine ‘write’! I LOVE: “dewdrops... ‘glorious bright’ (!)” AND: absolutely any kind of “box made of time(!)” as well as: “… somewhere in each waterfall I feel there is a distant call…” and the powerful ending: “ view the Nova of your death… A new beginning and new breath” sustained applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a wonderful poem of singing the transformation of life. If I have a courage to have your view. beautiful and profound. have a wonderful evening, Sir Tabin |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Distant calls of waterfalls Beckon everyone May they echo far and wide  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can not pierce the chaos gray Nor can I say this is the way But somewhere in each waterfall I feel there is a distant call ~*~ Yes, Sey... Indeed there is a distant call, where waters come now break the wall where pathways hither are once again, and Brigadoon, she welcomes in. ~*~ Smiling at you, always... your Sunshine |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"A new beginning and new breath" your every poem is a new breath Sir Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah yes  |
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Nightingale Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 31Depths of The Unkown, UK |
Yummy! yes to new beginnings! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I hope you can see me smiling from here Sy. You know I love to explore these endless questions, and words like this, keep my mind happily pondering. I truly believe the challenge is life itself ... and the reward for all our hard work, comes thereafter. As you so beautifully said: “A new beginning and new breath” I love that …wonderful words to ponder. You’re making me think this morning as I enjoy my cup of tea with you.  Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, your words give me that morning "push" that I sometimes need for that "new beginning"~~~ I am almost there  M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Your poetry is a map of every day, a mastery of the mystery of time. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is absolutely beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, a Nova....I like that, Sy. The waterfall imagery took me to a peaceful place, too. A treasure, this! *hugs*....jo |
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jeevs New Member
since 2007-07-10
Posts 4 |
Awesome I wish I could think of something nearly as good as that. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can not pierce the chaos gray Nor can I say this is the way But somewhere in each waterfall I feel there is a distant call The path of life to me is clear With all its pain and all its fear It is the essence of a power As beautiful as a flower I'm so infactuated by water, the sea, ocean...and it does speak and pull and tug as you explain, but it also sooths us and places great big arms around our souls, protecting us from the rain... hugs for this beauty |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every time I think I've surely read your best... you give us another gem. *S* But I'll gladly fill my library with your work... especially when... like now... I can't even choose a favorite segment because every line is so beautiful!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... wonderfully expressed! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So view the Nova of your death A new beginning and new breath I was sitting here thinking about him and hoping he is in a better place, and space. What an incredibly wise man, and I miss him. |
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