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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-07-09 05:35 PM



Perhaps A Woman That Wants Me

In my mind
I visually close
the door on relationships
where I want a woman
that doesn't want me,
and then I open
a new door full
of possibilities.
Behind this door,
perhaps a woman
that wants me.

JamesLee
09July
2007


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Robert Jordan
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1 posted 2007-07-09 06:55 PM


James,

Yeah, that happens to a lot of us.  Just wait, Ms. Right will come along.

BTW, nice poem.

Bobby

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-07-09 07:50 PM


romantic and good.

enjoyed

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-07-09 11:11 PM


perhaps, but if not, you'll be okay



exhale
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4 posted 2007-07-10 01:51 AM


I'm glad I saw hope in this.
Wonderful.

suthern
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5 posted 2007-07-13 04:13 PM


I hope so, James... you deserve one!!! And those others... they aren't worth having... (I tell myself that, anyway *S*)
Neeraja
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6 posted 2007-07-13 04:44 PM


will Ms. Second best do?


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-07-13 04:47 PM


Thank you Robert, Drauntz, passing shadows, exhale and suthern for the kind responses...
Passing you said "perhaps, but if not, you'll be okay." and I know that I will, but I would prefer to be involved in a loving relationship, so I want more than O.K...I want allright...  As usual it takes two in agreement.
Suthern...They are worth having...but not worth desiring if they don't want to be with me.  If I didn't want to be with someone, even though they desired me, I would want them to respect my desires...James

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-07-13 04:58 PM


Thank you for responding Neeraja...
Yes I believe that is what happens...with time and desire...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-07-13 08:37 PM


James... you are OK and alright in my eyes my sweet friend.... hang in there!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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