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Magnus
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0 posted 2007-07-08 03:31 PM


Sweeping the humidity, of a stalled sun bleached day
Building caveat of sea air, that now made its way
Evening fingers run highlight through brunette flowing back
Ninety five route to southbound in pursuits that days lack

All the horses purred hard, silver mustang to sport
With the top down accenting silhouette in cohort
Yet alas, by the wink of a twilight serenade
On a beach road, shattered glass her white wall splayed

Was pure silk that he spied, from the ground to the stars
Stirring thoughts of romance from Mother Earth to Mars.
A motor would strain to keep her lips from his reach
As cool waters rolled softly in wait of lights breech.

His demeanor so cool on an evening so hot
So he strolled nonchalant, even though he was not
His assistance to offer, with raw muscle and will
When she saw him approach, turned her pounding heart still

And the mountains would rise to the highest of peaks
As desperation brought cries and sleek eagle shrieks
For a filly she was, and a bud they would bloom
On a lovers worn trail as twin flames lit their room

A tire exploded in their efforts to dash
And a spare awaited his immediate thrash.
For once the jack fell, the bare earth he could see
It was time that this lady met a sure pedigree.

They would race to the meadow, where each would explore
All they’d struggle to restrain that which held back to roar.
From a distance drew closer and in eye sight could tell
Loves sweet dream awaited just the ring of their bell.

© Copyright 2007 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-07-08 05:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
Martie
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2 posted 2007-07-08 05:35 PM


Dear Barry and TD

I don't know how you guys manage to melt into eachother's words like that...a beautiful way, it is...the story was wonderful!

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-07-08 05:53 PM




perfect TD and Barry
as I knew it would be

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-07-08 06:42 PM


beautiful and truly beautiful. esp love

"And the mountains would rise to the highest of peaks
As desperation brought cries and sleek eagle shrieks"

enjoyed

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5 posted 2007-07-10 03:22 PM


long time coming... and well worth waiting for! *S* Seamless, superb collaboration! *S*
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6 posted 2007-07-10 08:34 PM


I'm so pleased I stopped in this evening to read.
It is so good to see you two dueting once again.
~Hugs to you both, Nancy~


~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2007-07-12 06:53 AM


Well, I sure can't tell "who wrote what" ... this was seamless, and very much enjoyed. A lovely collaboration!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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