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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. No stars fireflies Crickets and yet A bright half moon Argues against an early night There will be time Enough to sleep The moon is a mirror In which one sees the face of God The look of the father in final hours And what if As one grows older The more he should want to be alone With silence for is it not, After all, there and then at the end One life and no other However surrounded By things and beings He will feel and know Coming to a close . |
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Aloneinmyhead Junior Member
since 2007-07-08
Posts 30Tennessee |
Wow this is nice. I enjoyed. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
before or after? I'll come back with more later |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
I shall cry  to my death to down the half moon into the tides to polished off it by waves that used to carried the dream from far back of the beginning of the world to your silent night I left other half be a warm smile to the living life remember kindly to bury me with the sun so I will be warm and lighted in the dark and not scared and water me in spring you will see flowers for your poem    [This message has been edited by Drauntz (07-08-2007 11:31 PM).] |
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