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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2007-07-08 07:42 AM




And so
I think the time has come
When we will part our ways
And say goodbye..
I know there will be tears
I know there will be sorrow
There will be no laughter in the morrow
But you need to know that somewhere
Along the path
Along the journey
I loved you for the longest time
But now
We have nothing left
We have no tomorrow
We don’t even have words
That can convey the loneliness
We both feel
Towards each other
Towards life
Nothing in the end
Can save us from the destruction
Of ourselves…

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2007 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-07-08 08:10 AM


Roniece,
Sad but true, well done.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-07-08 08:12 AM


Thank you Sir Sy... your comment gives me heart   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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3 posted 2007-07-08 03:49 PM


Hi Roniece, a heart felt write here my friend, sad but it seems a part of life's wall that one day we meet, it seems just too hight to climb, but without climbing we can't go on.
Enjoyed the read my friend, hoping you have a great day and put on your climbing shoes.

Rick  

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4 posted 2007-07-08 04:06 PM


Something tells me that a lady of your
style, smile and gleam of an eye can and
will overcome!  If ya need a small nudge,
well just ask. and I am sure there are about
a hundred or so poets who will jump onboard.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2007-07-08 05:09 PM


Perhaps the time has come
and perhaps not my friend.
Choices made by two hearts.
hugs...James

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-07-08 06:41 PM



oh Roniece
so sad and so well spoken

big hugs to you my friend...


Drauntz
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Los Angeles California
7 posted 2007-07-08 06:43 PM


very sad, very sad. a very good peom
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