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serenity blaze
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0 posted 07-06-2007 04:31 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

* * *

Patience

"Do you feel me now?"
A breeze is blowing from Nor'east
and sheers are blustering our needs:
"Tell me, do you feel me now?"

I smell coffee.
I smell need.
Eyelet cotton
on the sheets
I meet your eyes meet mine in greet:
"Tell me do you know me now?"
I lick my lips. I hear the tide.
I trace my fingers on your back--
I feel you curl you're "you" of mine

patience

as I lick your lack...


Urgency

as I, again,

take your gentles

in between

red lips longing for a stream:

patience, patience

hungrily

aching in the feed of this:

~lovely~lovely~

~loveliness~

"Do you feel me now?"

murmer:

"Do you feel me now?"


Breaking

in the arch of greed

and

NOW

oh-now-oh-now-oh-now


and then:

I bit him, and impatiently

"That's it!"

(it is)

I suckled:

"Yes, it is, it's me"

in

the  

need

as my knees were shuddering

thighs of bicker

quivering

restless in the dark of me:

"Do you feel me now...?"

I leaned

into tomorrow, yesterday,

pounding with my bad bad ways:

"I think you feel me now."

* * * * *


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 07-06-2007 06:06 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

whoa lady, again you have rocked these pages of blue with your incredible talent.  Much enjoyed this one K.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 07-06-2007 06:47 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Wow!!!  Serenity, your writing is awesome!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 07-06-2007 06:56 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

sitting here looking at the strawberry fields...wondering where your mind goes..
and how it comes back without muddy shoes

enjoyed you ms serene
Drauntz
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4 posted 07-06-2007 07:01 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

Dear SB. beautiful. You are, after all, a very romantic poet.

have a very good sleep and a wonderful next day!!
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Awesome, Serenity, simply awesome.
passing shadows
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very passionate

outstanding work
dgvarner
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7 posted 07-06-2007 09:43 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

Yes girl!  That's a good one...!!!

enjoyed...more than once...!

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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8 posted 07-07-2007 02:13 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I'll have what you're having.
Kit McCallum
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Wow ... I'm not sure I've got that much patience ... you should have seen how quickly I read that, lol.

Well done Karen, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Jaime Fradera
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10 posted 07-07-2007 03:16 PM       View Profile for Jaime Fradera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaime Fradera

O, how I would long to be with Karen!
But, of course,
all of us will have to share,
so that each of us can come to know.
How could she have known
my most intimate and secret thoughts,
which I have never shared with anyone?
Or is it just imagination?
I will keep this for a LONG, long time,
for nights where I can play pretend,
and fantasize that someone wants me ...

Sunshine
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11 posted 07-07-2007 03:44 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Applauding the poem...

and smiling at the replies...

you just continue to...

outdo.



The Lady
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12 posted 07-07-2007 05:35 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



"as my knees were shuddering

thighs of bicker

quivering"


ouch!
this hurts so good Karen!

you have an amazing talent
and I am envious
serenity blaze
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13 posted 07-07-2007 07:58 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

The pleasure was all mine.



Thank you all very kindly for indulging me yet again.

and Jaime?
Martie
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14 posted 07-08-2007 06:05 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Karen....you peel the skin back, then lay down with what's under it.  Wheew!  
Jaime Fradera
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15 posted 07-12-2007 08:43 PM       View Profile for Jaime Fradera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaime Fradera

Yessssssssssss!
It is the middle of the night here on Pleasure Island, what with all the time zones and stuff,
but it tells me that in the realm of soul,
I sleep with you.
:-----)
divine chaos
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wow ... just .. wow
my dear, you are amazing *smiles*
I'm with Kate,
I read you with a green eye

~Sheli
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17 posted 11-05-2007 03:55 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
Cpat Hair
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18 posted 10-07-2010 02:07 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

yes, amazing... is one of the words I use to describe your writes..
but only one...of many
 
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