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Open Poetry #40

Insightful Reading

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2007-07-05 07:37 PM

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Insightful Reading
05 July 2007

Heart, her hand,
a man, worry to soul.
Age, an arrest,
her question of him.

Husband, father, happiness,
this woman and her worth.
Delight, love, her love of him,
passion, and bother, could, would.

Distance, travel, can it overcome,
so long to wait, unsure in thought.
His land of supper, food for thought,
the net, the tranquillity caught.

His heart, her hand,
elegance, beautiful.
Impatience, his mercy,
marriage, yes or no.

© 2007 Christopher W Herbert
(a New Zealand Poet)
All Rights Reserved

a poet who cares

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2007-07-06 02:26 AM

enjoyed this, thanks for sharing~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

2 posted 2007-07-06 02:46 AM

ALL I can say is thank you, because your comment on my long lost poem got me back here. Even if for a brief time only.

After all I do write like the wind and I am unsure if PIP can keep up - lol

CWH

a poet who cares

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