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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-05 11:22 AM


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From some now
Lost in the mist island
At times when the moon
Is full surrounded
By particular stars

One can in silence
Which is always best
Watch them slowly come
Out of nothing
Known in daylight
To drift by a lambent sea

Occasionally a she
Will notice the witness
Turn from all others
And mutely gaze

Oh my friend
Should you look too deep
However wise

You are lost forever
To those eyes


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-05 05:29 PM


romance overflowed here.

beautiful and perfect.

one of your best!!!

have a wonderful afternoon, sir John!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2007-07-05 08:38 PM


I'm not sure about this one but it left me a lonely feeling
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