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Dreaming |
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matthew hallman Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 10 |
Dreaming As u lay here, no energy to do anything. Crying, I can think of one thing and one thing only, When I think of it, I weep even harder. Its her. The love of my life, were has she gone, how is she doing. I close my eyes and think of all the things I love about her. None I see her beautiful smile, I can still smell her hair and feel the touch of her skin beneath my hands. It fills with happiness as I remember her ever detail. My tears of pain turn to tears of love. I look up at the ceiling and as I look; I see a flash of her. She’s looking down at me with a look, this look that makes me quiver. I smile at her and she’s gone. Then I remember that it was only a dream, she isn’t here with me and sorrow fills me once again. It was a good dream, a wonderful dream. I have to find her, I know she’s out there waiting for me to come after her. I look back at the ceiling once again hoping she’ll reappear, I don’t see my love. The dream is over and I get to my feet. Energy rushes through me once again, it makes me smile. She inspires me, fills me, completes me. She gave me my will to live from parts unknown. She is the woman of my dream’s and the owner of my heart. The woman of my dreams. Matthew R. Hallman 07/04/2007 |
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matthew hallman Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 10 |
For anyone that reads this. This is the first one i ever wrote. Please let me no what u think. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
We can all benefit from the little glimpses through our mind's eye, as we dream of what may be one day. I enjoyed getting a glimpse of your inspiration, Matthew. Nicely done. Welcome to Passions!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Write more! |
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matthew hallman Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 10 |
ty everyone i will have to post some more. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Matthew! My goodness, that is quite an impressive first attempt at writing a poem! With a romantic and poetic heart such as yours, you have certainly come to the 'write' spot!  May your dreams become your reality! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
Welcome to PIP, You will love it here, alot of great people with amazing words to make your day, and friendship, to treasure for years~ Great poem, thanks for sharing. My spirit will rise |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and romantic. very good. welcome to PIP the wonderful place. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
In dreams and in love there are no impossibilities Author: Janos Arnay That which the dream shows is the shadow of such wisdom as exists in man, even if during his waking state he may know nothing about it.... We do not know it because we are fooling away our time with outward and perishing things, and are asleep in regard to that which is real within ourself. - "The Dream Game" Author: Paracelsus ~ARH |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To dream is to live well... Welcome to Passions, Matthew. Please, check your Email for a very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Pip, I hope you enjoy your time here in the halls of blue. Very nice first attempt of writing, I will be looking for more. |
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