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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-03 04:31 PM


Alas It Is

I miss her,
but what is
a miss
but thoughts
of emptiness
of someone
that may or
may not return.

Alas, it is a
  part of love...

And at this moment
a part of love
that is so real.
At this moment
the part of love
I wish I didn't
feel.

JamesLee
03July
2007

Alas-an exclamation of sorrow,
pity, regret or worry.
Miss-to feel or regret
the absence or loss of.



© Copyright 2007 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-03 08:43 PM


beautiful again. always beautiful

have a wonderful 4th of July sir.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-03 09:17 PM


Thank you Drauntz...and you have a wonderful 4th also...James
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2007-07-04 06:35 PM


Beautiful just beautiful.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan
4 posted 2007-07-04 07:43 PM


such a beautiful poem. so touching.
Aloneinmyhead
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since 2007-07-08
Posts 30
Tennessee
5 posted 2007-07-08 10:33 AM


Sadly we all go through that lesson. Love is hard, but I am glad I have it for now.
Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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6 posted 2007-07-08 11:17 AM


Oh James, i feel this and understand it well.
Larry C
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7 posted 2007-07-08 03:11 PM


James,
Sad but too true. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
8 posted 2007-07-08 03:28 PM


Love, a blessing or curse, be nice if the blessing part was always there, enjoyed the write James.

Rick

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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9 posted 2007-07-08 06:43 PM




touching James

I am so sorry...

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