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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-07-03 03:14 PM



A clock
tickles out my heart
to skip around the sun
if only to prolong my life
less then a second
why just go to Dali
So I may keep my love
by the fire.

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paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan
1 posted 2007-07-04 10:23 PM


I had to read this three times, but wow, I got it!!  A very deep piece of writing.  wonderful!
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