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Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
Posts 180


0 posted 2007-07-03 02:40 PM



Rain falls
thunder crashes
lightening strikes
a perfect soundtrack
to the drama that is unfolding in front of us.
Tears fall
down my face
staining my memories
and leaving me grasping for something familar,
something that I know.
Yet the fog is affecting my vision,
and I cannot see clear.
I need to get to you
I'm running
but I don't know where.
I've lost sight
of the object that I crave.
They've taken away our light
there's nothing more I can do.
I've lost you to the dark shadows
that pulled you in too quick.

I had no chance..

We will never see our rainbow
and now I can only watch the aftermath
through haunted eyes
knowing that I could never save
the one person
I have always wanted to protect.

© Copyright 2007 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-07-03 05:02 PM


Nice writiing...James
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