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dgvarner
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0 posted 2007-07-03 12:26 PM



PRICE TAGS


There were price tags
And price stickers
Black marks and rips
     Where prices had once been
There was gift wrap
And gift bags
And tissue paper
There was packaging around
Many wonderful things

And she handed me a paper sack

In it was a hand made card
     As some of the others had done
And a pinwheel on a stick
And a rock

A rock she had painted

Just for me

I watched as she looked on proudly
It was all she had
And she made it for me

A little paint and a smile
And it was the best gift I got
     For my birthday that year…

There was no price tag
     On my rock--
You just can’t put a price tag
     On a rock…


-dgvarner


© Copyright 2007 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 2007-07-03 10:48 PM




can't put a price tag on this kind of love either g

I enjoyed this so much

MarkG
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2 posted 2007-07-04 12:32 PM


i loved this a lot...the best gift is from the heart not the store...right?

great write

Mark

aziza
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3 posted 2007-07-04 01:21 AM


What a delightful poem. What a wonderful gift .. who knew a rock could contain so much, huh.

Love this,
A

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-07-04 07:03 AM


Nice...James
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2007-07-04 07:20 AM


Nothing can replace that kind of love DGVarner. This brought a smile as I read this ... along with the urge to call my mom up!  Very much enjoyed. Nice to read you again!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

dgvarner
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6 posted 2007-07-04 12:41 PM


Hey guys!  Thanks so much for reading!  I'm so happy to get your replies   

This was something I watched while at a birthday party for a friend of my 9yr old.  She was so appropriate to the little girl who painted her a rock--I was moved by her gentleness with the situation...

It was an awesome rock...!

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

paullallady
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7 posted 2007-07-04 11:37 PM


what a lovely poem about the true meaning of love and giving.
SPIRIT
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8 posted 2007-07-12 10:29 AM


PRICELESS!

passing shadows
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9 posted 2007-07-12 08:28 PM


I read this one earlier when you posted it but for whatever reason, I didn't say so

a touching story that will always be with me, thank you

Drauntz
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10 posted 2007-07-14 11:59 AM


a beauty and interesting image.
Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 2007-07-14 02:09 PM


Oh!  I got tears reading this!  Pet rocks are the best things when special hearts and hands embellish them with love.     So glad you shared this.  ~ K
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Gaia
12 posted 2007-07-16 12:03 PM


being a rock hound, I love such gifts!
vlraynes
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13 posted 2007-07-18 02:52 AM


I know... I'm late...

but just wanted ya to know
that I was here... and I read...

and this made me smile...

especially loved the end...

"There was no price tag
     On my rock--
You just can’t put a price tag
     On a rock…"

makes me want a rock...


love ya, gale...


"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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