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Winter Butterfly
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since 2007-02-03
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The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.

0 posted 2007-07-01 07:51 PM



You shower me away
Only to come back again
If only I could see
What draws you to me
The danger or mystery
Silk of my hair
The curves of my body
Feel of them as you press close
Closer still

You asked if I wanted you
Did my body betray
I turned away quickly
Your challenge pulling me back
Not scared of answering
I've been here before
A breath from yes
Danger it brings
Intoxicating

No words spoken
I reach for your hand
Silken skin to rough
Turning it slowly between us
My eyes focused
      Only...
On your guilded cage of gold

"I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon"

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2007-07-01 08:05 PM


Fine 'write'!

excellent choice of P.I.P. "UserName" (ID) also!

Applause!!

Winter Butterfly
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since 2007-02-03
Posts 61
The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.
2 posted 2007-07-01 08:15 PM


Why thank you very much dream. Poetry comes easy with the right insipration.  Dangerously I've had plenty of that lately.

I think the name suits me as a child of winter learning to thrive in the sunlight. So thank you again.

~Winter~

"I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2007-07-01 08:48 PM


beautiful sis


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