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Abe
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0 posted 2007-07-01 11:02 AM



RE-BIRTH

Back at the birth of our Nation
We fought to be Free from oppression
Something unique in the World
And we learned many a hard lesson.

There was some trial and error
Although, we finally got it right
But, it seems that nowadays
Some Rights are fading from sight.

If we let them slip away from us
Even just, a little at a time
If we don't stand, to preserve them
It will most surely, be a crime.

It's government, “By and for the People!”
Not to be dictated, by a few
And it's time we take our Country back
And what we hold, “Self-evident and true!”

When Freedom was really threatened
We stood together in the fight
But, there have been those times
When those Wars, just weren't right.

We are still the greatest Nation
That this World has ever known
But, Freedom for other peoples
Can't be forced, but must be shown.

We must set the right example
And protect our own Constitution
Not let it be changed around
To suit some other's resolution.

Speaking of our great Constitution
And our Bill of Rights, too
We should take time to read them
That's something, everyone should do.

So, this Fourth, let's set a goal
To make our Founding Fathers proud
Tell our Government, “You work for us!”
“Twisting our Laws won't be allowed!”

07.01.2007

older ones >

INDEPENDENCE DAY

In the year of 1776
That paper was decreed -
They were tired of oppression
And wanted to be freed .

They wrote a Declaration
So the whole world would see
This was, "the home of the brave
And the land of the free".

They signed that piece of parchment
The leaders of this land
Knowing, divided they would fall
But, together they could stand.

A new world lay before them
Untamed from shore to shore -
They swore the would protect it
If it meant going to war.

Battles have been fought
And many lives have been lost -
So sad something so basic
Has such a high, high cost.

Seems freedom is a luxury
There's some would bind us all -
Like then, together, we can stand
But divided, we will fall.

More than two hundred years
Have past by since that day
That each of us celebrate
In our own different way.

We should be proud and thankful
Pay a share of the cost -
Not take freedom for granted
For it easily could be lost.


AND, PROUD TO BE

Two hundred and thirty-one years
After we planted Freedom’s seed
After our Country’s Declaration
This World still has a great need.

Time for the Peoples of all Nations
To learn what we have always known
Since the very first and Proud day
Our Stars and Stripes were flown.

But, we can’t force Freedom on them
For if we do, it won’t be Real
It’s something that must grow on you
To change the way you Think and Feel.

We can only try to show them how
And be an Example they can follow
Stand up against those in our own Ranks
Who try to take Freedom’s we know.

We must show we have the Courage
To not let our own people take away
Any of those Rights so Guaranteed
To us, on that long past, July day.

We must Protect our Way of Life
And let the rest of the World see
That it’s something to be Proud of
When you live in a Land of the Free.


JULY THE FOURTH

I wonder what those folks would think
(Those, who wrote our Freedom’s Declaration)
Would they believe, those happenings
That have, forever changed our Nation.

Would they believe, some terrorists
Are, from our Country, homegrown
Spreading hate, death, and destruction
In the Homeland of their own.

Would they believe our “open door”
Has ushered in our enemy
Those who believe we’re evil
And don’t believe in Liberty.

What would they think, if they could see
Crime running rampant, in the street
Guns, drugs, and homeless people
And so many more, locked-in, retreat.

Would they believe, Freedoms treasured
Have been twisted all around
To where the criminals civil rights
Beat the victims, to the ground.

Would they believe, that businesses
Most of them, big and small
Treat their employees as the pawns
To reach, “the bottom line”, that’s all.

Would they believe, those voted to Office
Who we should trust, to guide the way
Can’t be trusted, most of the time
To live up to what, they say.

What would they think, would they rewrite
And would they take exceptance
To what we did, with what they wrote
In The Declaration Of Independence.


IRAQI INDEPENDENCE

We should have waited till the Fourth
To have handed over Power
Then they could have shared that day
When we had our Finest Hour.

They could have Declared Independence
Like we did in Seventy-six
And if they’d have asked us all about it
We could have shown them a few tricks.

We could have told them, "Watch the Feds!"
So they wouldn’t go "that" way
To be "owned" by special interests
While all the Common People pay.

So they would have the Retirement
They’ll work all their lives to get
To treat all of the old and sick
That our Medicare hasn’t yet.

So they wouldn’t have the homeless
We force to live out on the street
And have places to fight addictions
And those retarded, we mistreat.

So they could take care of their Veterans
Those, who survive a shooting war
And for families of those who Give All
Take care of them too, even more.

Oh, we could give them an earful
About the Best Country on this Earth
To help make theirs even better
Than we have made ours worth.

We declared our Independence
On the Fourth day of July
And we will always remain Free
If we don’t forget the reasons, Why.

07-02-2004



Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.

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RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
1 posted 2007-07-01 01:43 PM


Bravo! I salute your sentiments.
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2007-07-01 02:35 PM


Del you do put out a wealth of knowledge and beautiful thoughts. Thank you, martyjo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-07-01 04:42 PM


Nice writing...I have written to them many times about many issues concerning "We the people."...
If we don't have strong convictions in our heart we will elect weak and foolish representatives...and suffer as their foolishness unfolds on the floors of Congress...for example Senator Kennedy...James

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