Relationships That Don't Last

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Open Poetry #40

Relationships That Don't Last

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-01 07:25 AM

Relationships That Don't Last

Today I will do many of
the things that I enjoy.
Hike the old Pali road.
Read some history books,
and finish reading
"Confessions of An
Economic Hitman."
Write as many words
as slip from my thoughts
onto written page.
Spend one hour
at 24 Hour Fitness,
listening to my favorite
dance music while on the way.
Than me and a lady friend
will grab a tray and enjoy
a Japanese Seafood Buffet
at the Mall upon the
end of the day.
And as another day goes,
I will continue to let go
of a relationship
that didn't last,
and let her slowly
slip into my past.

JamesLee
01July
2007

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2007-07-01 10:09 AM

good job! on all counts

hugs, g

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2007-07-01 10:11 AM

good read

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-07-01 01:03 PM

ah James... this is so good
and so real

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-07-02 03:50 PM

Thank you dgvarner, vandana and The Lady for the nice responses...James

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