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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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Of all the tricks of memory, the cruelest Is accuracy. ~ Geoffrey Brock, The Orpheus Variations memory instructs me in the ways of pain asks of me do you remember when he called you mi corazon said you are… love do you remember when he asked are you magic or a shaman memory demands of me you must think of the way his feet look naked vulnerable how his mouth tastes when he has finished smoking the look of his chest thumping heart beats the smell of his head you must remember how he always said I love you more ‘cause I am bigger only love can warm and baby … we are stellar then you must remember this he is gone |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and flowing like cool breeze as usual. beautiful again. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Drauntz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
They say that every cell of our body holds our memorys... A positive attitude goes a long way toward making good memorys... For example a failed relationship is not a disaster, it is a learning experience...and perhaps we will fare better the next time if we learn some important lessons...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you are so right James good or bad it's all lessons |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
memories are the necklace we wear around our hearts some days they are stone some days pearls so happy to see you and beautiful as always |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
More than beautiful. Always was and ever shall be. Mon Ami. MoonShadow . [This message has been edited by MoonShadow (07-01-2007 10:25 AM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i believe you have to remember to get through the mourning process--and begin to 'live' again... very nice write... hugs, g |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...what power in the soul of this. Stunning write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Helen for all of it... smiles dear Sir Moonshadow thank you for your sweet words my friend thank you g TD thank you so much |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh sweet lady, I too remember and yes, he is gone.... huggin you tight m'friend. 
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear lady...such an intimate look at love. I'm sorry.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I too, have memories. ~ But for my own peace of mind, I keep only the good ones.  However, there are times, by doing so, it only makes me miss him more.Your ink is always so tender and honeysuckle sweet ~ and is such a pleasure to read. Hugs with love, LA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for the words and hugs gentle Donna thank you so much Martie thank you Linda Angel hugs with love to you |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate... precious memories ... good to read you again, I feel like I have been away too long! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
as the sands babe...as the sands..enjoyed your art here ms |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Why do I not remember this one... Am i having a blond moment or did you not send this to me. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting write! applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Roniece m’friend you HAVE been away too long so have I thank you stranger darlin’ I appreciate your eyes and always your words Monklet your moments are all blond remember? goofy girl... thank you poet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this really gets me good it will stay for a long time |
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Aloneinmyhead Junior Member
since 2007-07-08
Posts 30Tennessee |
This is sad, but lovely |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Dixie I know you know how memories sting thank you Alone |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
do you remember when he asked are you magic ~*~ Yes... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Karilea that was a sweet moment wasn't it? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those last lines are so accurate... for those are the memories that sneak up on you and kick sand in the teeth of all the happy ones. Beautiful, touching write!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What we remember seems even more priceless when a loved one is gone, for it keeps their love near us. I am sorry for the heartache. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
memory instructs me in the ways of pain asks of me do you remember when he called you mi corazon said you are… love magnificant alluring sensual beautifully articulated!!!! |
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