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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-06-29 01:44 PM


howard :

                                                         is her game

                                                   as sweet as her name?

pat summitt :

                                    you tell me you're the one in her hall of fame

                                                       what is your aim?

                                    and how long will you practice your aim?

                                    before she realizes that Knoxville is not as far as she claims

                                              you two are wasting her flame

howard :

                                    i've told her the same

                                                      and she's burning up

candace parker :

                                                       who is this dame?

                                                 [while returning his cup]

                                                        is this your Aim?

                                              i've been learning what's up

                                     and i really do think you love her

howard :

                                     if this works, you guys can be on my Sports Illustrated Cover

                                                              any day



                                                                                        love,

                                                                                        howard and my lady vols




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MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14
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Virginia
1 posted 2007-06-29 01:46 PM


wow, that's quite a cool style you've got going on there. i like it!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-29 01:51 PM


useless friends in a good poem. fun to read.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-06-29 08:43 PM


Howard... keep writing and I'll keep reading - just lovely!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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4 posted 2007-06-30 02:45 PM


thanks megmeg  

thanks drauntz     

useless friends???  better not say that in big orange country  

i will roniece  

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