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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-06-28 02:48 PM



within these walls
there is no heart
like a heartbeat grown silent
needs a kick start

under this roof
there is no warmth
cold as ice
with the seven dwarfs

four of them died
the other three cried
snow white moved to LA
and didn't even say goodbye

In this house...


there is...


no love...

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-06-28 03:05 PM


aw, I feel the pain that flows in this Julie.     
Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
2 posted 2007-06-28 06:12 PM


Yo Angel4aKing,

That Snow White chick needs taken to task.  Good work.

Bobby

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-06-28 08:22 PM


the perfect modern day fairy tale


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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4 posted 2007-07-01 07:09 PM


Julie Ann

Such a good poem - I love it a lot and am saving it to my library.  I think it is one of my favorites that you have written.

Good job and you know -- I wish you tons of happiness.

Alison

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