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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-28 06:15 AM



These Parts of Love I Know

She's my little china girl
and she always will be,
no matter how far
away from me.

Once love is embraced
within the heart
it seems to grow
while together or apart.

These parts
of love I know.
Love is holding on
and love is letting go.

JamesLee
27June
2007





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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2007-06-28 06:16 AM


Hold on James ... nicely said RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-28 12:53 PM


beautiful and romantic. a bit if philosophy of life at the ending

good again.


enjoyed

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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Florida USA
3 posted 2007-06-28 02:24 PM


Yes sometimes knowing Love is to know to let go.  This was beautifully put.  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-06-28 04:12 PM


Thank you Roneice, Drauntz and ladylisa for your kind remarks...James
The Lady
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5 posted 2007-07-01 01:28 AM



letting go is hard James
beautiful work

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2007-07-02 11:58 PM


"hold on loosely...but don't let go..."  

enjoyed the read...

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
7 posted 2007-07-03 12:01 PM


You did a nice job putting these feelings to word.  Touched me.
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