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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
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california

0 posted 2007-06-28 02:52 AM



okie so i honestly just started typing and let what ever come out so here it is its not finished but i dont even know if it makes sense so okie well read away


I didn’t know that I would end up out on the streets alone no family left to love or to love me no friends to call upon when I am in need I wasn’t always so sad so lost so out of place I had a family I did I loved them with all my heart I can remember trips as a kid out with my family my dad was so proud to be with me and my mom loved me so much I could tell every time she smiled that wonderful wide smile a smile that will forever be in my memory but those memories are the only thing I have left of my family. It all happened so fast I didn’t realize I was messing my hole life up I didn’t know that I would be so addicted to the drugs and the alcohol and so fast one time was all it took and I was hooked I really didn’t mean for it all to go so far I wish I could go back and fix all the things I did wrong the things I said to my mom the swings I took at my dad the way I treated my friends I wish I could have recognized that they were only trying to help to lead me in the right direction but its to late now I’m on my own I didn’t want there help now I just want a friendly smile. Its hard living out on the streets I have no home no bed I have nothing during the day I walk looking for something to eat or hope to find someone who understands that im not a bad person I just made some bad mistakes in the past im not going to rob you or try to kill you im a human just like you a warm meal would be a blessing for me

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-06-28 06:02 AM


Nice writing...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-06-28 07:34 AM


my goodness... this is an amazing write.. I will always offer you a smile to warm your heart..   Hugs to you my friend  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-06-28 08:35 AM


heartwrenching and sad...
I hope you are ok...

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