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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-06-28 01:32 AM




Millions of armies stand,
fighting against the good,
of what was, what is,

My heart has become pierced,
slowly, thy queen is dying,
her kingdom lays in utter
doom,

Decay of dead leaves,
burning castle towers,
what will become of
her?

Time is at hand,
your mighty sword,
is the only weapon
to save her kingdom.

All will be lost,
please come,
rescue her,

She awaits
for you to slay
her dragons.

Will you arise,
with honor, dignity,
to serve your queen?

Or has something foolish,
dark and mudded,
blinded your eyes?

While your kingdom dies,
and your true love,
lays slain.







[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-28-2007 05:31 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Gifted
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since 2007-06-26
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1 posted 2007-06-28 01:53 AM


Another beautiful piece from you.  Yeah, I'll defend your Kingdom.  I might as well conquer it while I'm there.  LOL.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-06-28 01:58 AM


Oh, You must be prince charming..hello! LOL!

(Gifted lifts up his sword)To conquer....

Thank you sir..I am graciously humbled by your words (taking a bow, with hand extended)

MarkG
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since 2007-06-21
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3 posted 2007-06-28 02:03 AM


wow....Im so enchanted by your writing...all the write questions are asked here and the answer has to be yes...i would save u....i really loved it!

Mark

Gifted
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Caribbean
4 posted 2007-06-28 02:05 AM


I take ARH's hand, and gently kiss it.  You perfume the essence around me creating a fragrance that is overwhelming.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2007-06-28 02:42 AM


What a warrior you are Mark, such bravery shall be honored!

She bows....in your sacrifice to her!

glad you loved it!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2007-06-28 02:44 AM


Thank you Gifted for that lovely kiss on thy hand,
what a gentleman!


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-28-2007 03:19 AM).]

Gifted
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7 posted 2007-06-28 02:56 AM


Indeed.  A knight that brings light, so gentle a man I am.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2007-06-28 02:57 AM


Thank you Gifted!

It is fun to role play on here...

poetry is from imagination...

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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9 posted 2007-06-28 12:56 PM


a wonderful one!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2007-06-28 01:40 PM


Thank you Drauntz
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