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PoloniusFicklebottom
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0 posted 2007-06-27 01:12 PM


Color the grass blue, and you will walk on water and waves.
Paint the clouds of red and orange, set the sky ablaze.

Whisper to the shooting stars and travel beyond the moon.
Face your worries, stare down fear, and fear will soon fear you.

Redecorate your grief with a smile and keep your humor.
But do not fight emotions thinking your struggle will end sooner.

Look beneath the depth of skin, let no one judge your face.
Do not create conclusions before you have reached your place.

Explore and make mistakes, that's how everybody learns.
Believe that it is never too late, don't be afraid to turn.

Let no evil speech impale your soul, for these sounds cannot hurt.
You will find that love can exist even when no words can be heard.

Move forward and remember, you learn from the past, but don't live it.
Stand your ground, hold fast, 'til it's yours at last, never give in.

-But don't believe that mercy is reserved for those that are weak.
for, in humility, in forgiveness, the great emerge from the meek.

Live, for life is the greatest gift, and it is yours to keep.
There is nothing out there you can't have, there is no one you can't be.


-Polonius Ficklebottom
from the upcoming childrens poetry book
Zen & Zen's-Ability: Poems, Zen, & a Little Hope

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-06-27 01:48 PM


Oh this was sensational writing

especially loved....

-But don't believe that mercy is reserved for those that are weak.
for, in humility, in forgiveness, the great emerge from the meek.

Live, for life is the greatest gift, and it is yours to keep.
There is nothing out there you can't have, there is no one you can't be.
Outstanding!!!!!

PoloniusFicklebottom
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2 posted 2007-06-27 01:59 PM


Thank you Lee,

if you so desire,
you can hear me reading it here!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=692670

www.the-school.org

lightkeeper
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pluto
3 posted 2007-06-27 03:29 PM


This is truely inspirational .... and would make any lightbulb glow brighter.... A pleasure  reading

LK

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-06-28 06:00 AM


Nice...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-06-28 06:03 AM


wonderful inspirational writing here! Welcome to our blue pages - I hope to read more of you ... this was superb!  RDB

Ilove your name by the way - it makes me smile

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

adagio
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6 posted 2007-06-28 11:04 AM


Great and ambitious !
very much enjoyed
adagio

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2007-06-28 11:24 AM


wow

welcome to Passions!

loved this!

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-06-28 11:31 AM


Polonius! Polonius! Polonius! Who art thou? ~ Methinks, perhaps, I know!

But if I be wrong in this supposition, your inspiring mots of spiritual wisdom still fall not upon deaf ears.

Loving Light,

Earth Angel


ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2007-06-28 12:24 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyed your sweet side.

Drauntz
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10 posted 2007-06-28 12:28 PM


beautiful poem.

welcome to PIP the wonderful place

lacydee
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11 posted 2007-06-28 01:04 PM


this was great. I loved it. Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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Florida USA
12 posted 2007-06-28 02:10 PM


Oh Wow!!!!  Your poem is so true....  Life is for living, learning and growing.  Never give up on it, for it offers a wonderous adventure that is unique for each of us.  Thank you for posting this, it is truly Beautiful.
rwood
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Tennessee
13 posted 2007-06-29 05:49 AM


wonderful words to live by.

I love blue grass, btw.

Looking forward to more of your art,
regina

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
14 posted 2007-06-30 06:10 PM


Welcome to Passions, Polonius.

Please, check your email for a very
Special Greeting!

I'm going to look forward to more of your works!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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