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Open Poetry #40
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kyler
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since 2007-06-21
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0 posted 2007-06-26 08:23 PM

It was over
Just like that
No explanation, no nothing
They walk their seprate ways
Never to share the same path agian
Both with tears in their eyes
But niether want to admit how much they meant to them
And no one will ever know how much it hurt
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-06-26 08:26 PM

I've been here before

and I do know how much it hurts


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-06-27 12:04 PM

nicely expressed - the hurt can linger

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-06-27 06:26 AM

Nice writing...James
marcel
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az, usa
4 posted 2007-06-29 05:12 PM

I am one who knows the pain moving on brings...we chalk it up as experience and remember the good moments....nice piece.
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