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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Caressable Island I sailed to Caressable Island late last night, needing my friends to caress me, to hold me tight. My love life wasn't progressing as expected, leaving me feeling sad, neglected and rejected. As I dropped anchor in the moons silky glow, my troubled heart was beating out of control. And then it happened, I felt the release from my duress as my heart was embraced within the islands sweet caress. Find your caressable island. JamesLee 26June 2007 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetRomanticJamesMichael~ You've sailed into a heart that knows exactly what you're feeling~ Here's a special 'Caressable Huglet'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
JamesMichael, Not bad at all. It could use some stroph breaks. You know where. Bobby |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
where is this place?! I wanna go!!  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how romantically sad but you always end with hope. must be guarded by an angel. beautiful!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ahhhh another perfect James Michael write! |
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